Showing posts with label long essay. Show all posts
Showing posts with label long essay. Show all posts

Monday, 15 December 2014

Title : after convicted with crime, a criminal normally would be either sentenced to imprisonment or fined for his/she action. Some country on the other hand, sentence criminal to rehabilitation. In your opinion, what is the best ways to curb crime

Title : after convicted with crime, a criminal normally would be either sentenced to imprisonment or fined for his/she action. Some country on the other hand, sentence criminal to rehabilitation. In your opinion, what is the best ways to curb crime 

Agree punishment
1 criminal would regret of his/ her action
a) Their regret for wasting time in prison
b) Their regret for wasting money because of their action

2 guarantee safety
a) For society / community
b) For criminals .

Criminal litigate is a prudent process to come up with the most justice punishment for the criminals. Meanwhile, in some country their sentence criminals with rehabilitation, which is not, the best option to curb crime. Their reasons are is a part of human right and mercy on the criminals. This is wrong and it bring more disadvantage than advantage.
Therefore, imprisonment and fined are still the best ways to curb crimes.

Firstly, punishment is essential to bring up the feeling of regret to the criminals. Their regret for wasting time in the prison. As we already acknowledged that, a normal rehabilitation only takes about 6 to 12 month and it only in weekend rather than the actual imprisonment that takes more than 25 years.
On the other hand, criminals regret for the money used to pay fined. While in rehabilitation government will funded their behaviour modification. Therefore, criminal who been punish is more regretful and fear for committing crimes again than who been going to rehabilitation.

Secondly, imprisonment is important to guarantee safety for society and criminal itself. To assure society safety and prosperity is by separating criminal for society. Imprisonment also an act of preventing and avoiding for further crime commit by criminals. We also does not have enough cops to keep an eye on criminals all the time. Imprisonment also can secure criminals safety. There are probability that victims family or relatives will do violent to criminals as an act of revenge. Therefore, imprisonment essential to guarantee society and criminals safety.

In conclusion, physical and money punishment are the best ways to overcome crime problem. Maybe rehabilitation is more democratic and protected human right but protected innocent peoples are more important than criminals are. Therefore, rehabilitation can only be apply to light mandatory crimes such as pickpocket, blackmail and smuggle. 


Monday, 10 February 2014

Limo’s annual car sales in 2012

Limo’s annual car sales in 2012
           The line chart shows the number of two different type of limo sales in month on 2012. Whereby the table below shows the price of petrol in RM and all four quarter in 2012.  In general, the increase of petrol price effected the sales of 2000cc cars in 2012 however; there was a rise demand on 1300cc cars due to the decrease sales of 2000cc cars.
           Sales of 2000cc cars rose from 4500 to the highest 5000 units from January to March. It dropped drastically to 2000 units in June. The increase in petrol price for the corresponding period from RM2 to RM2.50 may have caused the dramatic drop in sales of 2000cc cars.
            However, its sales climbed steadily from June to September, from 2000 to 3000 units respectively. Sales then remained constant at 3000 units until December. This trend might due to the fell in petrol price from third quarter to fourth quarter, from RM 2.30 to RM2.20.
             1300cc cars sales decreased from 3000 to the lowest 2000 units from January to March then climbed significantly to 6000 units in August. Sales of 1300cc cars peaked in October at 6500 units and reach a plateau until December. The steady increase sales in 1300cc cars could be due to the drop in the demands of 2000cc for the corresponding period, result of petrol increase.
In conclusion, the unstable price of petrol affected the sales of 2000cc cars in 2012. The irregular price did not affect the sales of 1300cc cars in 2012 

Tuesday, 4 February 2014

TV ADVERTISING TODAY IS HARMFUL FOR YOUNG CHILDREN (DISAGREE)

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TV ADVERTISING TODAY IS HARMFUL FOR YOUNG CHILDREN

        Advertisements are now considered an essential tool to disseminate information and spread advertising opportunities to different group of people through print noticed and other electronic media such as via television (TV), radio, social media and others. it is unquestionable that advertising has become very much a part of modern life today.In almost everything we do, we are constantly bombarded by advertising. Its is hard to escape from the influence of advertisements. Teenagers and young adults are becoming easy prey as they are quite vulnerable to the advertisements that they exposed to. However, I strongly believe that today television does not effect young children's growth.  In fact, advertising has helped in their physical and mental development. Poor parenting is to blame and not advertisement itself whereby parents must train and educate children about healthy eating habits, smart consumerism ethics and product awareness.
       First and foremost, parents must educate their children on healthy eating habits. Poor parenting techniques are to blame for children's bad eating habits. Children's inclination to eating more junk food and fast food at regular interval has become a norm, even with their parent's consent.Television advertisements may have influence over children choice of food as they easily captivated by advertisements that promotes various food item that are usually detrimental to health as they contain colouring and ingredients  that can trigger health risk if over consumed. For instance, young children do not mind consuming burger stuffed with their favourite sausage and mayonnaise or thousand island cream. Despite, this influence has come from television advertisements captivated children to unhealthy food habits. This is especially, when children sit watch television all by themselves without monitor by their parents. This aggravates as they get to be easily influence by most of the advertisements they watch. Nevertheless, parents must not forget taht it is their duty to educate their children on healthy eating, healthy living and  practise a good eating habits by set good examples so that their children can emulate then from an early age and instil within themselves the important and awareness of consuming healthy food. They will then reap the harvest of enjoying a better quality of life by consumption of healthier and nutritious food. Healthy eating also mean healthy living ahead. Health is wealth.
        Secondly, parents should also educate their children on smart consumerism as this helps protect children from captivated in television advertisements. Advertisements have, in many ways, promoted products that seemingly assure healthy living condition. In reality, most product that are advertised have their own propaganda of capturing market pie with wide range of consumer products. Children, being children need to be taught how to optimize the value of money they spend. Parents must always involve their children when shopping and this will tremendously reinforce smart shopping and consumerism practices. One is to teach them to prepare a shopping list before actual shopping is done.   This will help reduce the tendency and probability of unnecessary purchases that may just burn a deep holes in one pocket. the temptation to put everything into the cart is always at play and being young and naive, children have the tendency of buying everything that please their eyes. although,at time they can be allowed to splurge on their food and toys, they should know that their have consumer rights to bargain for and receive quality products as advertised. Hence, equipping with necessary knowledge will keep them well informed and not being easy prey to unscrupulous business proprietors

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