Title : after convicted with crime, a criminal normally would be either sentenced to imprisonment or fined for his/she action. Some country on the other hand, sentence criminal to rehabilitation. In your opinion, what is the best ways to curb crime

Title : after convicted with crime, a criminal normally would be either sentenced to imprisonment or fined for his/she action. Some country on the other hand, sentence criminal to rehabilitation. In your opinion, what is the best ways to curb crime 

Agree punishment
1 criminal would regret of his/ her action
a) Their regret for wasting time in prison
b) Their regret for wasting money because of their action

2 guarantee safety
a) For society / community
b) For criminals .

Criminal litigate is a prudent process to come up with the most justice punishment for the criminals. Meanwhile, in some country their sentence criminals with rehabilitation, which is not, the best option to curb crime. Their reasons are is a part of human right and mercy on the criminals. This is wrong and it bring more disadvantage than advantage.
Therefore, imprisonment and fined are still the best ways to curb crimes.

Firstly, punishment is essential to bring up the feeling of regret to the criminals. Their regret for wasting time in the prison. As we already acknowledged that, a normal rehabilitation only takes about 6 to 12 month and it only in weekend rather than the actual imprisonment that takes more than 25 years. On the other hand, criminals regret for the money used to pay fined. While in rehabilitation government will funded their behaviour modification. Therefore, criminal who been punish is more regretful and fear for committing crimes again than who been going to rehabilitation.

Secondly, imprisonment is important to guarantee safety for society and criminal itself. To assure society safety and prosperity is by separating criminal for society. Imprisonment also an act of preventing and avoiding for further crime commit by criminals. We also does not have enough cops to keep an eye on criminals all the time. Imprisonment also can secure criminals safety. There are probability that victims family or relatives will do violent to criminals as an act of revenge. Therefore, imprisonment essential to guarantee society and criminals safety.

In conclusion, physical and money punishment are the best ways to overcome crime problem. Maybe rehabilitation is more democratic and protected human right but protected innocent peoples are more important than criminals are. Therefore, rehabilitation can only be apply to light mandatory crimes such as pickpocket, blackmail and smuggle. 

BOOKS VS EXPERIENCE

BOOKS VS EXPERIENCE

The progression from secondary school to college is an exciting journey. Students are face a typical competency among their own to allow being in tertiary education. One of the learning tools is by reading books. There are some objection said, “Not everything is learned is contained in book”. I believe that books are still the best platforms for learning.

Firstly, learning by books is easy and independent. We already acknowledged that books are mobile which means it is light, easy to carry and small. Other than that, books are independent tools for learning. We do not need teacher’s assistance to learn and study the books. We need only ability to read and understand to know the content of a book. Compare to experience knowledge who needs full demonstration from the expert to do the practical. 

Secondly, content of a book compare to experience. Books contain a lot of detail and easy explanation to help the reader to understand better. The content of books are specific and trustable due to statistics and graph studied by the author also the author provided reference to show the information are correct. Furthermore, most of books been written by famous and intelligent authors who educated and prosperous person who want to share their knowledge and secret by writing a book. This knowledge only can be gain by reading books compare to experience knowledge who does not has the detail and specific knowledge same as the books. 

In conclusion, books are the best tools for learning compare to experience knowledge. Some people disagree because books was boring and not entertaining. I am sure books will be upgrade and evolve to attract reader such as put in voice or video to the books.

Media violence on children mind

Media violence on children mind

1 pornography

Harm children mind

Cause Unofficial marriage

2 become more aggressive and over imaginative

Copying violent action

Can't differentiate real n fantasy

Since, Internet had become center and mother of media in 21^st century. Internet had globalize the world and today internet connects people in every country. Media had brought violent to children mind and it has changed children attitude. Children nowadays are very different for children in past. In my moderate opinions, I believe that this thing happen because of media violent.

Firstly, children are becoming more and more pervert and sexual addicted. Easy access that Internet offered misuse for pornography. Children in such a young age have acknowledged the meanings of sex through porn video. They became more addicted to sex and when it come to some level, it will lead the children to have a sex. That will lead to having a bastard baby and bring shame to their family. Therefore, media had changed children to be sexual addicted.

Secondly, media has made children immature. Children nowadays are aggressive compare to before. Violent shows such as wrestling, action movie and boxing have become a role model to immature children. This perilous to the children and it surrounding. They maybe can hurt they self-due to inexperience and lack of safety in the action their try to copy. Other than that, children nowadays are over imaginative. Other than that, children becomes over imagination. They cannot differentiate between fantasy and reality. This is because media shows a lot of fiction story like superman, Star Wars and batman. Therefore media change children mind into immature and making the wrong decision.

Finally, children need gain knowledge from other ways instead of mass media. There a many knowledge we can gain from outdoor. In addition, mass media are never be the best education source that we can trust. Therefore, parents need to provide the best ways of education other than media.

Tertiary education determines a person’s success in life

Sample essay: partial agreement

Question

“Tertiary education determines a person’s success in life”

Suggested answer

            In this globalised world, tertiary education is believe to be prerequisite and ticket to a better future. Student and working adult alike have always dreamed about graduation from university and enjoying the privilege of better return and perks. This has caused many pursue university education, believing that it guarantees a more promising life. I partially agree that tertiary education determines a person’s success in life. This is because tertiary education contributes to success, our determination; personal interest and goal in life also have irrefutable impact on our achievement.

            Firstly, tertiary education alone without the determination to press in toward achieving our goals in life may not be sufficient to steer us toward. Without doubt, that persistence is akin to keep the oil lamp lit. Without a clear vision of what we want to be and do, university education will just go down the drain as some graduates have been known to refuse employment due to their easy going attitudes and their plain idleness that makes them lethargic in their pursuit foe a better life. One may argue that some successful figure like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs may be colleges’ dropout but they made in life. However, most of us forget that these two geniuses had strong determination and unique gift that they knew they could embark on. Proven that they are among those who contributed to the advancement of technology, which has made life easier than ever. Although university education does, to an extent, determine a person’s success in life as it enable one to discover interest, chart his future and equip oneself with specialised skill to secure a permanent job, one’s determination to succeed is one undeniably superior prerequisite for a successful life.  

            Secondly, personal interest also matters more than just the idea securing a university degree. The saying that man shall not live by bread alone is relevant for all times. The knowledge one acquires during his studies allows him to map out his own future. Abraham Lincoln, despite coming from a poor and humble family, rose from a simple country boy to be brilliant lawyer and then president of the United States. He accomplished all this not just through his hard work and struggle but also his strong education knowledge background. Bill Gates and Steve Jobs left college when they found that tertiary education was uninspiring and a waste of precious time. Instead, they took courageous step quitting collage and pursuing their interest. They proved that personal interest help realise their dreams in doing what they love the most and could best deliver. Their success stunned their lectures who later commended them for generating easier dissemination of information and communication. Indeed, their success has become the talk of the town for many decades and even today, they are highly honoured for their persistence and hard work, derived from their strong personal interest in computers and drive to prove themselves.