Wednesday, 29 January 2014

MUET PAPER 4 (ESSAY WRITING) EXAMPLE ESSAY

MUET PAPER 4 (ESSAY WRITING)
EXAMPLE ESSAY
BENEFITS OF TOURISM
“TOURISM IS BOON TO MALAYSIA” WHAT IS YOUR OPNION
                The tourism industry is fast becoming a booming industry, especially in the third world countries. These countries offer more natural and scenic enviroment that develop countries cannot really present because of industrialisation. Malaysia has benifited much from tourism whereby many employment opportunities have been created. It is indeed a boon to the economy of the country. This has immensely improved the earnings and standard of living among those directly involved in this industry. Tourism is more than travelling as it can bring economic and social  benefits whereby it promotes racial unity and harmony, creates higher level of health awareness and generates greater income to those participanting in this industry.
                Fistly, tourism promotes racial unity and harmony to local tourism. Being a multiple racial country consist different  races sch as malays, chinese, indians, kadazans, ibans and other minority groups have to learnt live together. Despite our diverse differences in our ways of live, we have lived in peace and harmony,remained united and strong. The ability to work together strenghtens our diversity. This attachment has made tourism in Malaysia a wonder to foreigners, especially our diverse culture and practices. Local tourism has encounraged Malaysians to enrich our understanding of the local practices. A visit to a long house or Harvest Festival celebration amongs sabahans will futher develop the sucess of our tourism. Both local and foreign visitors get to learn, exchange ideas and understand the unique lifestyle of the people. Hence, tourism bridges the difference and promotes a more meaningful sencse of unity among the different races.
                Secondly, tourism  promotes a greater awareness of hygiene and health service. Malysia, noted for its filthy restroom, needs to immediately address the menace if it wishes to remain competitive in the industry. Cleaniness is our priority if we want tourism become our main sourceof income. In addressingthe banes of Malaysian toilet among the local and foreigners alike, both goverment and corporate  sectors should work together towards providing a better and a conducive enviroments for tourism to thrive in this industry. The needs for a better and cleaner toilets, parks, towns, heritage sites and eateries should be taken seriously before boast itself of being a healthcare centre in the region. Certainly, this will improve the quality of life of all stakeholders  in this field apart from boosting the image of Malaysia internationally especially among foreigners. Public health and wallness will be improved due to the cooperation between goverment and non-goverment sectors maintain the cleaniness and hygiene in the country.

                Thirdly, tourism brings in lucrative revenues to our nation. Both local and foreigner tourism bring benefits to our economy. Goverment and corporate sectors should emphasis and enrich local tourism though promotes through television, newspaper and etc also not encouraged and prevent  local people from sign up to foreign tourism because our money will flow to other countries but if local people choose our money flow in the country and avoid our money currency to fall. Whereas foreigner tourism will increase our money currency by foreign tourist spent their money in their travels in Malaysia that will increase our money currency. It also increase income for thus who participant in tourism industry and created more employment opportunities to our local people and decrease our unemployment in malaysia. Indeed tourism brings revenues that increase our economy and decrease local people living cost in the country.

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